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The graph gives information about regular teaching jobs by year of graduation. It compares the successful employment English teachers and French teachers between 2001 and 2007. In the year 2001, about 70 percent of English and French language teachers were hired with the rate of English teachers were a bit of higher than French ones. For the next two years, both of languague teachers decreased in recruiment. English teachers fell sharply to a low of 40 percent in 2003. For French first-year teachers, the number hit a trough of about 52 percent in 2002 and then bounced back to 69 percent in 2003. Between 2003 and 2007, the rate of recruited French teachers moderately increasing from about 68 percent to about 75 percent with unsightnificant fluctuation in 2006. In comparison, a slight recovered from English language teachers were about 44 percent in 2005. But this rate continued to drop considerably. In 2007, only 27 percent of English first-year teachers successed in finding a regular teaching jobs, compared to about 75 percent of French teachers. Overall, the French teachers were employed while the opposite trend was for English language teachers over the period.
The graph gives information about regular teaching jobs by year of graduation. It compares the successful employment English
teachers
and French
teachers
between 2001 and 2007. In the year 2001, about 70
percent
of English and French language
teachers
were hired
with the rate of English
teachers
were a bit of higher than French ones. For the
next
two years, both of
languague
teachers
decreased in
recruiment
. English
teachers
fell
sharply
to a low of 40
percent
in 2003. For French
first
-year
teachers
, the number hit a trough of about 52
percent
in 2002 and then bounced back to 69
percent
in 2003. Between 2003 and 2007, the rate of recruited French
teachers
moderately
increasing from about 68
percent
to about 75
percent
with
unsightnificant
fluctuation in 2006.
In comparison
, a slight recovered from English language
teachers
were about 44
percent
in 2005.
But
this rate continued to drop
considerably
. In 2007,
only
27
percent
of English
first
-year
teachers
successed
in finding a regular teaching jobs, compared to about 75
percent
of French
teachers
.
Overall
, the French
teachers
were employed
while the opposite trend was for English language
teachers
over the period.
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