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The line graph given illustrates how much population of group ages has grown in New Zealand within 100 years, starting from 1950.

The line graph given illustrates how much population of group ages has grown in New Zealand within 100 years, starting from 1950. B7MDw

The line graph given illustrates how much population of group ages has grown in New Zealand within 100 years, starting from 1950. Overall, the proportion of New Zealand population almost fluctuated. While the percentage of population of 0-14, over 65 ages fluctuated gradually, population growth of 25-37, 38-45 ages saw dramatically fluctuation. In 1950, the proportion of 0-14 ages accounted for about 5%. This figure increased to exactly 20% by the end of the period. A similar fluctuant trend was seen in the proportion of over 65 ages, which declined from 60% by about 5% at the period examined. At the beginning of the period, the rate of 25-37 ages registered approximately 21%. This figure declined significantly to exactly 0% in 2050. A similar fluctuation was recorded in the percentage of 38-45 ages, rising from 25% in 1950 to 40% in 2050.

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population
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ages
 has grown in New Zealand within 100 years, starting from 1950.

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, the proportion of New Zealand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 almost fluctuated. While the percentage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 of 0-14, over 65 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
ages
 fluctuated gradually
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsocietypopulacepeoplecommunityculturestate
population
 growth of 25-37, 38-45 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
ages
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saw
dramatically
 fluctuation.

In 1950, the proportion of 0-14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
ages
 accounted for about 5%. This figure increased to exactly 20% by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. A similar Possible spelling mistake found.fluctuate
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seen
 in the proportion of over 65 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
ages
, which declined from 60% by about 5% at the period examined.

At the beginning of the period, the rate of 25-37 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
ages
 registered approximately 21%. This figure declined significantly
 to exactly 0% in 2050. A similar fluctuation was recorded
 in the percentage of 38-45 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
ages
, rising from 25% in 1950 to 40% in 2050. 