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The line graph given provides a comparison of the expenditure on books

The line graph given provides a comparison of the expenditure on books 2Krnb
The line graph given provides a comparison of the expenditure on books in four different nations during the period from 1995 to 2005. From an overall perspective, it is evident that residents in Germany spent more money on books than those in the other three countries. In addition, the expenditure on books of all nations showed an upward trend over the period supplied. At the beginning of the period shown, the amount of money which German citizens paid for books was the highest, at precisely $80 million. The figures for those in France and Italy were lower, at around $55 million and exactly $50 million, respectively. However, the budget for books of residents in Austria accounted for the lowest number, at only $30 million. In the period from 1995 to 2005, Germany witnessed an increase in the amount of money spent on books, reaching a peak of approximately $95 million. There was also a steady rise in the expenditure on books to around $75 million for French people. The period between 2001 and 2005 saw a rapid climb in the spending on books of Austrians from $40 million to just over $70 million, higher than the final figure for Italians, at just over $60 million.
The line graph
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provides a comparison of the expenditure on
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books
in four
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different
nations during the
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period
from 1995 to 2005.

From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that residents in Germany spent more money on
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books
than those in the other three countries.
In addition
, the expenditure on
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books
of all nations
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showed
an upward trend over the
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period
supplied.

At the beginning of the
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shown, the amount of money which German citizens paid for
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books
was the highest, at
precisely
$80
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million
. The figures for those in France and Italy were lower, at around $55
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million
and exactly $50
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million
,
respectively
.
However
, the budget for
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books
of residents in Austria accounted for the lowest number, at
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only
$30 million.

In the
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period
from 1995 to 2005, Germany witnessed an increase in the amount of money spent on
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books
, reaching a peak of approximately $95
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million
. There was
also
a steady rise in the expenditure on
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books
to around $75
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million
for French
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people
. The
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period
between 2001 and 2005
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saw
a rapid climb in the spending on
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books
of Austrians from $40
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million
to
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just
over $70
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million
, higher than the final figure for Italians, at
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just
over $60
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million
.
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IELTS academic The line graph given provides a comparison of the expenditure on books

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