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The given charts evince howThe given charts evince how many zebras and buffalos and amount of annual rainfall per two years from 2005 to 2011 in Nboro Natural Reserve.

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The given charts evince howThe given charts evince how many zebras and buffalos and amount of annual rainfall per two years from 2005 to 2011 in Nboro Natural Reserve. Overall, there was a interrelationship between amount of zebras and total of rainfall whereas zebra’s number increased if there were much rain. However, the figure of buffalos still grew although the rainfall was less. Nboro Natural Reserve only had 40 buffalos about 12 fewer than zebras in 2005, at which point this number soared steeply to about 117- nearly triple/ almost three times in 2009, and reached a peak of 119 buffalos in two years later. Meanwhile, the figure of zebras rose moderately to almost 78 in 2007 before declining slightly about 8 zebras in 2009 and the end of the period by 85 zebras in 2011- increased by 33 over the period. The amount of rainfall in Nboro Natural Reverse in 2005 and 2009 was less than 2007 and 2011. Rainfall per year in 2005 and 2009 were 650 and 700 millimetres while in 2007 and 2011 the rainfall went up to 1, 100 and 1, 200 respectively. many zebras and buffalos and amount of annual rainfall per two years from 2005 to 2011 in Nboro Natural Reserve. Overall, there was a interrelationship between amount of zebras and total of rainfall whereas zebra’s number increased if there were much rain. However, the figure of buffalos still grew although the rainfall was less. Nboro Natural Reserve only had 40 buffalos about 12 fewer than zebras in 2005, at which point this number soared steeply to about 117- nearly triple/ almost three times in 2009, and reached a peak of 119 buffalos in two years later. Meanwhile, the figure of zebras rose moderately to almost 78 in 2007 before declining slightly about 8 zebras in 2009 and the end of the period by 85 zebras in 2011- increased by 33 over the period. The amount of rainfall in Nboro Natural Reverse in 2005 and 2009 was less than 2007 and 2011. Rainfall per year in 2005 and 2009 were 650 and 700 millimetres while in 2007 and 2011 the rainfall went up to 1, 100 and 1, 200 respectively.
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rainfall
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increased
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about 12 fewer than zebras in 2005, at which point this
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IELTS academic The given charts evince howThe given charts evince how many zebras and buffalos and amount of annual rainfall per two years from 2005 to 2011 in Nboro Natural Reserve.

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