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The line gragh shows energy consumption by fuel type in the united states from 1980-2008 with projected use untill 2030. Overall, fossil fuels have been dominant type and will continue this trend in to the future, nuclear and renewable energy sources have represented a small but significant propotion of totall energy use and despite small projected gains; it is projected that they will continue doing so. Petrol and oil command the biggest share with 35 quadrillion units (35q)in 1980 rising to approximatly 40q in 2008 and this trend is set to continue with a projected value of nearly 50q in 2030. In 1980 natural gas nd coal came in the second and third with around 16q and 20q respectively. however coal overtook natural gas in 1990 and despite some flunctuation, is set to be the second most used fuel in 2030 with just over30q. it is predicted that natural gas will level off and remain relatively constant at about 25q. Nuclear and renewable energies all represented around 4q in 1980 and flunctuated up untill 2008. It is speculated that nuclear energy will reach 10q by 2030 and solar/wind around 5q. with hydropower dropping and then remaining constant at approximaty 2q.
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consumption by fuel type in the
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from 1980-2008 with
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sources have represented a
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small
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but
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that they will continue doing
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Petrol and oil command the biggest share with 35 quadrillion units (35q)in 1980 rising to
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approximatly
40q in 2008 and this trend
is set
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value of
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nd
coal came in the second and third with around 16q and 20q
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coal overtook natural gas in 1990 and despite
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flunctuation
,
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fuel in 2030 with
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over30q.
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it
is predicted
that natural gas will level off and remain
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constant at about 25q.

Nuclear and renewable
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all represented around 4q in 1980 and
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flunctuated
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untill
2008. It
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