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The ptocess diagram shows how sporst shoes made

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the process diagram illustrates the course journey of shoes manufacture. overall, this technique consists of 11 steps. the first step is finalize the design and the last step is the delivery of shoes to shop or in foreign countries. the whole procedure takes 18 months. firstly, the initial stride would be finalized the design of sleeper. after that raw materials to be collected from Some industries such as tannery leather and mill fabrics. the rubber soul collected from Other industry. secondly the upper side of the sneaker would be cut for making. next to this organs of shoes transfer for sewing and glue the top part together with bottom part. lastly, after pasting shoes turn into box and that box is inserted in container. then the container ships into the warehouse now it is ready for shipping the products in the shop or foreign Nations.
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shoes
manufacture.
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overall
, this technique consists of 11 steps.
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the
first
step is finalize the design and the last step is the delivery of
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shoes
to shop or in foreign countries.
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the
whole procedure takes 18 months.
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firstly
, the initial stride would
be finalized
the design of sleeper.
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after
that raw materials to
be collected
from
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industries such as tannery leather and mill fabrics.
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the
rubber soul collected from Other industry.
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secondly
the upper side of the sneaker would be
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cut
for making.
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next
to
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this
organs of
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shoes
transfer for sewing and glue the top part together with bottom part.
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lastly
, after pasting
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shoes
turn into box and that box
is inserted
in container.
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then
the container ships into the warehouse
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now
it is ready for shipping the products in the shop or foreign Nations.
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