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The provided line chart shows the information about food consumption in European countries from 1979 to 2004.

The provided line chart shows the information about food consumption in European countries from 1979 to 2004. Nmwk0
The provided line chart shows the information about food consumption in European countries from 1979 to 2004. It is obvious that the majority of Chicken consumed in 2004 is 150 grams per person per week whereas fish is the lowest. From the line chart we can see that in 1979 a very high amount of Beef was consumed and a very low amount of Fish was consumed whereas the other two food consumption’s graphs were overlapping. In 1984 Chicken and Beef simultaneously increased but Lamb was decreased gradually. In 1989 and 1994 Lamb and Beef consumption decreased from 130 to 80 and 250 to 150 respectively and in 1999 Chicken consumption increased dramatically whereas the other food consumption graph decreased slightly. Lastly, Fish consumption graph was little constant throughout the years.
The provided line chart
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in European countries from 1979 to 2004. It is obvious that the majority of Chicken consumed in 2004 is 150 grams per person per week whereas fish is the lowest.

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see
that in 1979 a
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very
high amount of Beef
was consumed
and a
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very
low amount of Fish
was consumed
whereas the other two food
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consumption’s
graphs were overlapping. In 1984 Chicken and Beef
simultaneously
increased
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Lamb
was decreased
gradually
. In 1989 and 1994 Lamb and Beef
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consumption
decreased from 130 to 80 and 250 to 150
respectively
and in 1999 Chicken
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consumption
increased
dramatically
whereas the other food
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consumption
graph decreased
slightly
.
Lastly
, Fish
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consumption
graph was
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little
constant throughout the years.
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IELTS academic The provided line chart shows the information about food consumption in European countries from 1979 to 2004.

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2 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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