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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read by Software Engineering students, Civil Engineering students, and Electrical Engineering students annually at an Australian university.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read by Software Engineering students, Civil Engineering students, and Electrical Engineering students annually at an Australian university. OM6Np
The given pie charts reveal the count of journal articles read by Software engineering students, Civil Engineering students and Electrical Engineering students in a year at an Australian university. Overall, Software Engineering students read more number of articles whereas Electrical Engineering read the least. It is clear from the pie charts that 67% of electrical engineers read one to fve articles while this number is significantly lower among the Civil engineering students and Software engineering students being 1% and 5% respectively. Three by fourth of Civil engineering students are found reading six to eleven articles. 15% and 21% of Software engineering students and Electrical engineering students respectively read six to eleven articles. Shifting attention towards remaining data, it is evident that more than twelve articles are read by 80% of the SOftware engineering students which is the highest count. 24% of Civil engineering students and of them are Electrical engineering pupils who read twelve plus articles.
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Software
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Civil
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Electrical
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in a year at an Australian university.

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Software
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Electrical
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the least.

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from the pie charts that 67% of
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while this number is
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Civil
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engineering
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being 1% and 5%
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Civil
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reading six to eleven
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. 15% and 21% of
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Software
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engineering
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and
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Electrical
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engineering
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respectively
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six to eleven articles.

Shifting attention towards remaining data, it is evident that more than twelve
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are
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by 80% of the
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SOftware
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engineering
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which is the highest count. 24% of
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Civil
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engineering
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and of them are
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Electrical
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pupils who
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twelve plus
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IELTS academic The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read by Software Engineering students, Civil Engineering students, and Electrical Engineering students annually at an Australian university.

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