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The bar graph portrait approximately different continents(Africa, Asia, N America, S America, Europe) rise in food production required to feed the whole population of the world in 2045. It is measured in millions.

The bar graph portrait approximately different continents(Africa, Asia, N America, S America, Europe) rise in food production required to feed the whole population of the world in 2045. It is measured in millions. yDa3V
The bar graph portrait approximately different continents(Africa, Asia, N America, S America, Europe) rise in food production required to feed the whole population of the world in 2045. It is measured in millions. Africa is at the top and has a huge need for food production to compensate for the food requirements of its people. Whereas Europe is at the bottom as it doesn't need to increase its daily bread. Africa is needed to produce 400 million of food to satisfy the food requirements of the human race. Next followed by S America, Asia, N America, Europe. S America is required to produce less amount of food when compared to Africa that is about 50 million. There is approximately a two million difference in food production between S America and Asia. On the other hand, N America is required to produce 30 million approximately to satisfy the hunger needs of their people. Europe is at the bottom and it just requires to produce around 10 million amount of food. The European continent just needs around 10 million more food to be produced by 2045 and that would be enough for its human race whereas Africa needs to produce 400 times more in 2045.
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production required to feed the whole population of the world in 2045. It
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production to compensate for the
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requirements of its
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. Whereas Europe is at the bottom as it doesn't
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400
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to satisfy the
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requirements of the human race.
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when compared to Africa
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production between S America and Asia.
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around 10
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The European continent
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IELTS academic The bar graph portrait approximately different continents(Africa, Asia, N America, S America, Europe) rise in food production required to feed the whole population of the world in 2045. It is measured in millions.

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