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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female smokers in Britain during the period between 1950 and 1990.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information contained in the chart.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female smokers in Britain during the period between 1950 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information contained in the chart. EdVPQ
The given graph compares the proportions of British men and women who smoked over a period of 50 years starting from 1950. Overall, it is clear that while the figure for male smokers showed a downward trend, the opposite was true for females. It is also notable that male smokers greatly outnumbered females over the period shown. In 1950, it was recorded that nearly 80% of men smoked compared to 15% that of women and this figure decreased gradually to about 72% over the next 30 years. Meanwhile, the proportion of female smokers nearly doubled during the span of 50 years and hitting its peak at 40% by the year 1980. During the period from 1960 to 1980, while the figure for men experienced a significant drop from around 72% to over 40%. that of women also showed a drop from 40% to nearly 30%. Moreover, it can be seen that the overall number of smokers showed a decline over the period of 50 years.
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graph compares the proportions of British
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men
and women who smoked
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a
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of 50 years starting from 1950.

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, it is
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that while the figure for male smokers
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showed
a downward trend, the opposite was true for females. It is
also
notable that male smokers
greatly
outnumbered females
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the
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period
shown.

In 1950, it
was recorded
that
nearly
80% of
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men
smoked compared to 15% that of women and this figure decreased
gradually
to about 72%
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the
next
30 years. Meanwhile, the proportion of female smokers
nearly
doubled during the span of 50 years and hitting its peak at 40% by the
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year
1980.

During the
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period
from 1960 to 1980, while the figure for
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men
experienced a significant drop from around 72% to
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40%.
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that
of women
also
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showed
a drop from 40% to
nearly
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that the
overall
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showed
a decline
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of male and female smokers in Britain during the period between 1950 and 1990. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information contained in the chart.

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