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The provided diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chewing gum.

The provided diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chewing gum. kgMWM
The provided diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chewing gum. Overall, there are seven main steps in this man-made operation starting with the melting of raw material, and culminating in the packaging of pieces of gum. To begin with, ingredients for the production of gum are collected and liquefied under high temperatures to create a type of gum substance. This chemical then lays on a filterer and is divided into a great number of strains of gum. Following this, these strains are conveyed into a container, where they are mixed with various compounds like flavorings, softeners, and sweeteners to produce chewing gum. Afterward, the mixture is flattened by a system of automatic spinning cylinders so that sheets of gum are formed. The sheets are next cut and broken down into individual pieces for convenient packaging. Finally, these gum pieces are covered with coverings of different materials like regular paper or aluminum foil and packed into boxes before being delivered to customers around the world.
The provided diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chewing gum.

Overall
, there are seven main steps in this
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man
-made operation starting with the melting of raw material, and culminating in the packaging of pieces of gum.

To
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begin
with, ingredients for the production of
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gum
are collected
and liquefied under high temperatures to create a type of
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gum
substance. This chemical then
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lays on
a filterer and
is divided
into a great number of strains of
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gum
. Following this, these strains
are conveyed
into a container, where they
are mixed
with various compounds like flavorings, softeners, and sweeteners to produce chewing gum.

Afterward, the mixture
is flattened
by a system of automatic spinning cylinders
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so
that sheets of
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gum
are formed
. The sheets are
next
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cut
and broken down into individual pieces for convenient packaging.
Finally
, these
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gum
pieces
are covered
with coverings of
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different
materials like regular paper or aluminum foil and packed into boxes
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before
being delivered
to customers around the world.
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IELTS academic The provided diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chewing gum.

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4 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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