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The chart shows the sources of carbon dioxide emissions between 1970 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the sources of carbon dioxide emissions between 1970 and 2000. we8mm
The line graph illustrates the quantity of carbon dioxide released from different sources in UK, during 1970 to 2000. As can be seen from the graph the tonnes released ranked from just over 10 million up to 65 million. From the 5 sources used 4 of them had fairly stable carbon dioxide emission till 1980 with an exception from industrial combustion which had the steady decline over these years. From 1980 to 1990 there were changes in all presented sources. Transport and industrial combustion had almost the same quantity at the end of 1990. Power stations account for the biggest quantity, releasing almost five times more than other sectors which again over this period of time remained the best releasers. In the meantime in 1990 to 2000 the trend was the same with the starting year with the only exception that transport took over the domestic. While industrial combustion, domestic, transport and other sectors’ carbon dioxide emissions almost levelled off, the power stations figure moderately fell. To conclude, the quantity of carbon dioxide emissions reduced in 2000.
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sources in UK, during 1970 to 2000.

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10 million up to 65 million. From the 5 sources
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dioxide emission till 1980 with an exception from industrial combustion which had the steady decline
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From 1980 to 1990 there were
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in all presented sources. Transport and industrial combustion had almost the same
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of 1990. Power stations account for the biggest
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, releasing almost five times more than other sectors which again
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this period of time remained the best releasers.

In the meantime in 1990 to 2000 the trend was the same with the starting year with the
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exception that transport took
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the domestic. While industrial combustion, domestic, transport and other sectors’
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dioxide emissions almost levelled off, the power stations figure
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in 2000.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the sources of carbon dioxide emissions between 1970 and 2000.

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