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The line graph compares figures for passengers who travelled per day by three different forms of transport in the UK over a period of 33 years.

The line graph compares figures for passengers who travelled per day by three different forms of transport in the UK over a period of 33 years. 0lyB9
The line graph compares figures for passengers who travelled per day by three different forms of transport in the UK over a period of 33 years. It is noticeable that the figures for people travelling by car and train increase significantly from 1970 to 2030, but the opposite was true for bus. The most substantial growth was seen in a number of people travelling by car. In 1990, there were around 5 million the UK commuters travelling by car, while the bus and train took for 4 and 2 million the UK commuters, respectively. In 2000, a considerable increase to 7 million in the number of car users and the figures for train users climb slightly to 3 million. By contrast, there were a moderate drop to 1. 9 million bus users. In 2030, It is predicted that the number of people travelling by car will reach a peak at 9 million, and the number of train users is also predicted to grow around 5 million; however, it is forecast that the figures for bus users will decline to 3 million.
The line graph compares
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for passengers who travelled per day by three
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different
forms of transport in the UK over a period of 33 years.

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figures
for
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people
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travelling
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car
and
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train
increase
significantly
from 1970 to 2030,
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the opposite was true for bus. The most substantial growth was
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number
of
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people
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travelling
by car.

In 1990, there were around 5
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million
the UK commuters
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travelling
by
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car
, while the bus and
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train
took for 4 and 2
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million
the UK commuters,
respectively
. In 2000, a considerable increase to 7
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million
in the
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car
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users
and the
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for
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train
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users
climb
slightly
to 3
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million
. By contrast, there were a moderate drop to 1. 9
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million
bus users.

In 2030, It
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that the
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number
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people
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travelling
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car
will reach a peak at 9
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million
, and the
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of
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train
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is
also
predicted to grow around 5
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million
;
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for bus
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will decline to 3
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IELTS academic The line graph compares figures for passengers who travelled per day by three different forms of transport in the UK over a period of 33 years.

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