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The diagram below shows information about the CO2 emissions from energy production in serveral regions around the world and their ranking from 1985 to 2005

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in the number of the emission of CO2 from energy production in five
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countries over a 21-year period from 1985 to 2005It can be
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that figures for Japan
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows information about the CO2 emissions from energy production in serveral regions around the world and their ranking from 1985 to 2005

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