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The two pie chart shows that the percentage of pollutant entering particular point of motion in a 1997 to 2007 Overall, during the ten-year period domestic sewage and offshore oill level is increased as compared with other pollution The quantity of domestic sewage entering the ocean is significantly increased 18% to 29%. The air pollution is almost same as before. In 1997 offshore oil percentage is 5% and after the 10 years which was about 14%. approximately three times higher than before. By contrast, industrial waste and marine pollution significantly lower than before as 8 percentage and 5 percentage during this period. In 1997 litter pollution is 4 percentage. however, it is interesting to see the was no litter pollution in 2007. The amount of farm waste produced to percentage during the period of 1997 to 2007.

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 of pollutant entering particular point of motion in a 1997 to 2007

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