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maps show the road access related information of a city hospital in the year of 2007 and 2010.

maps show the road access related information of a city hospital in the year of 2007 and 2010. xO5E9
The two maps show the road access related information of a city hospital in the year of 2007 and 2010. Overall, Separate car parking for employees and public in the south and east side of the building with ease access to the hospital building. Public transportation moved to the nearby health care centre. Firstly car parking for staff and public diverted in the year 2010 development. The roads that are accessible to health care city took a major changes, mainly two roundabout takes in place whereas one at city road junction and another one at in front of south side hospital, however, the main entry will remain same in the direction. Where car parking for public moved into various place that is on the east of the home whereas staff parking remains the same. Another major change in 2010 where bus station kept nearby patients house to access the bus service easily in case of emergency even tough outside of the public also can easily access the same transportation centre by a few min walk.
The two maps
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the road
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related information of a city hospital in the year of 2007 and 2010.

Overall
, Separate car
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parking
for employees and
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public
in the south and east side of the building with
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ease
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access
to the hospital building.
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Public
transportation
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moved
to the nearby health care
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centre
.

Firstly
car
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parking
for staff and
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public
diverted in the year 2010 development. The roads that are accessible to health care city took a major
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changes
,
mainly
two roundabout takes in place whereas one at city road junction and another one at in front of south side hospital,
however
, the main entry will remain same in the direction. Where car
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parking
for
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public
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moved
into various place
that is
on the east of the home whereas staff
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parking
remains the same.

Another major
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change
in 2010 where bus station
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kept
nearby patients
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house
to
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access
the bus service
easily
in case of emergency even tough
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outside of
the
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public
also
can
easily
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access
the same transportation
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centre
by a few min walk.
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IELTS academic maps show the road access related information of a city hospital in the year of 2007 and 2010.

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6.0
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