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The provided diagram details the process of manufacturing plastic-based products from molten plastic.

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The provided diagram details the process of manufacturing plastic-based products from molten plastic. Overall, this operation consists of 5 main stages, starting with the division into colorized molds, and culminating in the packaging of plastic items. To start with, liquefied plastic is sent to the molding area, where it is split into 3 molds in 3 basic colors (red, blue, and yellow) to create shaped plastic. After being cooled down, the solidified plastic goes through the first quality check performed mechanically. During such a stage, the item’s durability is examined, and those that fall under the standard will be eliminated. Subsequently, the plastic figurines are transported to a sorting zone for which humans are responsible. Based on how they are colorized, the plastic products are then categorized into 2 types: single colors and mixed colors. Following this, the plastic items undergo the secondary quality assuring system, but instead of durability like the first one, the color factor is tested. Finally, once the examination is completed, the products are wrapped up, ready to be distributed.
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the process of manufacturing plastic-based products from molten plastic.

Overall
, this operation consists of 5 main stages, starting with the division into colorized molds, and culminating in the packaging of
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plastic
items.

To
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start
with, liquefied
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plastic
is
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sent
to the molding area, where it
is split
into 3 molds in 3 basic colors (red, blue, and yellow) to create shaped
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plastic
. After
being cooled
down, the solidified
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plastic
goes through the
first
quality
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check
performed
mechanically
. During such a stage, the item’s durability
is examined
, and those that fall under the standard will
be eliminated
.

Subsequently
, the
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plastic
figurines
are transported
to a sorting zone for which humans are responsible. Based on how they
are colorized
, the
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plastic
products are then categorized into 2 types: single colors and mixed colors. Following this, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
items undergo the secondary quality assuring system,
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but
instead
of durability like the
first
one, the
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color
factor is
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tested
.
Finally
, once the examination
is completed
, the products
are wrapped
up, ready to
be distributed
.
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IELTS academic The provided diagram details the process of manufacturing plastic-based products from molten plastic.

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6.5
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