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A line graph show the percentage of different age group of cinema visitor in a particular country from 1978 to 2008 the information by selecting the reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

A line graph show the percentage of different age group of cinema visitor in a particular country from 1978 to 2008 the information by selecting the reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant NwYxg

The line graph illustrate the data of various age groups visited cinema in a particular nation in 1978 to 2008. It is observed that in 1978, the percentage of cinema visitors belonging to 14 -24 age group stood at 90%, which was the highest among the given categories during that year. It fell to 75% over next ten years. Afterwards it followed a parabolic path and was 80% in 2008. Moving on to 25 -34 age group, in 1978, four -fifth of the individual of the category visited cinema over the following year, it proportion underwent almost similar pattern as that of 14 -24 age group, though its percentage were lower from that group. It is a notice that in the case of 35 -49 age group the percentage of the cinema goers fluctuated between 40% and about 60% during the given year. In the case of 50 + individuals, again there were a wide variation over the given years. Their proportion stood at lowest point of 20% in 1988 and peaked at 50% in 2008. Overall, it is evident that going to cinema remained more popular among the younger age groups.

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age
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group
 the percentage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
 goers fluctuated between 40% and about 60% during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
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year
. In the case of 50 + individuals, again there were a wide variation over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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 years. Their proportion stood at lowest point of 20% in 1988 and peaked at 50% in 2008.

Overall
, it is evident that going to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovie theaterfilmmovie housedrive-in
cinema
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age
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