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the proportion of urban and suburban and rural household in a European country that had internet access from 1999 to 2004.

the proportion of urban and suburban and rural household in a European country that had internet access from 1999 to 2004. 26bOo
The given bar chart illustrates the information about the proportion of urban and suburban and rural household in a European country that had internet access from 1999 to 2004. The general overview here is that although the internet accessing on the rural was rising, the gap between the two areas had still wided considerable over the end of the period in question.   As can be seen that, the urban and suburban had the high internet access though out the period, rising rapidly from 15% in 1999 to 50% in 2002. However, after rising at 50% the following year. The growth rate slowly over the last two years, namely 52% and 55% respectively.   In addition, The rural was responsible a small percentage in 1999, the internet accessing rose dramatically from 2% to 35% at the end of the given period, This rise was particularly noticeable between 2002-2004, during which time internet accessing on the rural doubled.
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bar chart illustrates the information about the proportion of urban and suburban and
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rural
household in a European country that had internet access from 1999 to 2004. The general overview here is that although the internet accessing on the
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rural
was rising, the gap between the two areas had
still
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wided
considerable over the
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end
of the period in question.
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As can be
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that, the urban and suburban had the high internet access though out the period, rising
rapidly
from 15% in 1999 to 50% in 2002.
However
, after rising at 50% the following year. The growth rate
slowly
over the last two years,
namely
52% and 55%
respectively
.
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In addition
, The
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rural
was responsible a
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small
percentage in 1999, the internet accessing rose
dramatically
from 2% to 35% at the
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end
of the
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period, This rise was
particularly
noticeable between 2002-2004, during which time internet accessing on the
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rural
doubled.
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IELTS academic the proportion of urban and suburban and rural household in a European country that had internet access from 1999 to 2004.

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