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the given dagram shows thr dsy method of cofee production

the given dagram shows thr dsy method of cofee production 7aBWX
The given diagram illustrates the dary process by which cofee is produced. overall, this is step- by -step process that is comprised of eleven stages, biggning with gathering of cofee beans, ending with the distribution of packed cofee to the market, where it can be sold. in the biggning of the process, cofee beans are sorted from cofee trees by hands and then they are cleaned with sieve to remove dust particles. following this, beans are dried in sunlight for 4 weaks, during this time beans must be raked and turned as they are properly dry and ready to transfer for sorting them in silo. after this, cofee beans are transport to mill, where they are hulling by worker and granding by machines. In the subsequance step, beans are packed into baggs and sold for roasting process, where all benas aaa packed and label.
The
given
diagram illustrates the
dary
process
by which
cofee
is produced
.
overall
, this is step- by -step
process
that
is comprised of
eleven stages,
biggning
with gathering of
cofee
beans
, ending with the distribution of packed
cofee
to the market, where it can
be sold
.
in
the
biggning
of the
process
,
cofee
beans
are sorted
from
cofee
trees by
hands and
then they
are cleaned
with sieve to remove dust particles.
following
this,
beans
are dried
in sunlight for 4
weaks
, during this time
beans
must
be raked
and turned as they are
properly
dry and ready to transfer for sorting them in silo.
after
this,
cofee
beans
are transport to mill, where they are hulling by worker and
granding
by machines. In the
subsequance
step,
beans
are packed
into
baggs
and sold for roasting
process
, where all
benas
aaa
packed and label.
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