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The proces chart illustrates the manufacturing stages of recycled aluminium cans from a Waste cans to final finished recycled cans.

The proces chart illustrates the manufacturing stages of recycled aluminium cans from a Waste cans to final finished recycled cans. RNx2o

The proces chart illustrates the manufacturing stages of recycled aluminium cans from a Waste cans to final finished recycled cans. To begin, all used cans which threw by mankind in the dustbin are collecting by collection vehicles and departed to industry. After that the three process are to be done on usable cans. Firstly, cleaning the all cans with help of soap cleanner. Second, sorting the cans by electric machinaries. Third, tensile forces apply on cans and compressed that cans by either hammer or die equipments. After compression stage, cans are to be heated up to recrystalized temperature and convert metal form to liquid state. Moreover, melting metal convent in to thin strip which has 2. 5mm to 6mm thickness by rolling process. After the strige of rolling, to mould metal strip in the shape of can and labelling the name of company on the recycled can with use of coinning process. At the end, the final products are to be ready for shipping into market. overall, the whole process from waste cans to new recycle cans are very effective and flexible process. Furthermore, this method also eco-friendly for environment.

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, the final products are to be ready for shipping into market.

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