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The two maps shows the changes in an island after and before.

The two maps shows the changes in an island after and before. n6rXn

The maps illustrate how an island have developed in the past time. To begin with, in the earlier time, in an island a small beach was located on the west region, while number of tress were also seen in the an island. The area of an island was accounted at total 100metres and there was also all around a sea of a place. After that, enormous variations had been experienced in an island. in the east part, beach had been used for swimming. new accomodation had been constructed in the different part of the area, whereas modern footpaths were established fir houses to connect with each other. Reception and restaurant were new amenities for inhabitants which had bewn situated in the north region. vehicle track was also new facility that was directly connected with pier. Overall, the area had undergone major changes throughout the period where the most significant were addition of accomodation, restaurant and footpath facilities.

The maps illustrate how an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 have developed in the Did you mean "pastime"?pastime
past time
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, in the earlier time, in an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 beach was located
 on the west region, while number of tress were also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "an" is left.thean
the an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. The area of an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
was accounted
 at total 100metres and there was also
 all around a sea of a place. After that, enormous variations had been experienced
 in an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 the east part, beach had been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for swimming. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNew
new
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accomodation
 had been constructed
 in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 part of the area, whereas modern footpaths were established
 fir This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 to connect with each other. Reception and restaurant were new amenities for inhabitants which had Possible spelling mistake found.boonbeenbookBenboomboot
bewn
 situated in the north region. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterVehicle
vehicle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
track
 was also
 new facility that was directly
 connected with pier. Overall
, the area had undergone major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 throughout the period where the most significant were addition of Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
, restaurant and footpath facilities. 