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The pictures below show the process involved in making tomato ketchup.

The pictures below show the process involved in making tomato ketchup. GMVJj
The flow chart illustrates the information, how the tomato ketchup is been prepared by different methods. It is clear from the diagram, firstly, the fresh tomatoes have been picked from the plants and put them into the bucket. Secondly, according to quality, pick up the good and bad from them and send them into the factory by lorries. As regards fourth step, after removing three parts( stalk, seeds and skin) of the tomatoes, put the seeds into a container and crush it. In the next stage, add the mixture of sugar, vinegar and salt, before boiling it. Them leave it for minimum two hours. In the tenth step, the ketchup is been poured into a hotel and label them according to quality control products. The following step is to pack the bottles into boxes. The trucks load into supermarket and customers buy it for their need. In the last stage, people can serve these type of products with their types of food. Overall, the process involving fifteen various steps. It begins with picking them from their vegetation and ends in the customers food plate.
The flow chart illustrates the information, how the tomato ketchup
is been
prepared by
different
methods. It is
clear
from the diagram,
firstly
, the fresh tomatoes have
been picked
from the plants and put them into the bucket.
Secondly
, according to quality, pick up the
good
and
bad
from them and
send
them into the factory by lorries. As regards fourth
step
, after removing three parts
(
stalk, seeds and skin) of the tomatoes, put the seeds into a container and crush it. In the
next
stage,
add
the mixture of sugar, vinegar and salt,
before
boiling it.
Them
leave
it for minimum two hours. In the tenth
step
, the ketchup
is been
poured into a hotel and label them according to quality control products. The following
step
is to pack the bottles into boxes. The trucks load into supermarket and customers
buy
it for their need. In the last stage,
people
can serve these type of products with their types of food.
Overall
, the process involving fifteen various
steps
. It
begins
with picking them from their vegetation and ends in the
customers
food plate.
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IELTS academic The pictures below show the process involved in making tomato ketchup.

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