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the process of the plastic bottle recycling.

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The figure represented below displays the process of the plastic bottle recycling. Overall, there is a number of appliances that are used in this activity. There are also some human’s direct intervention to fulfill this process. In the first step, after the plastic wastes have been accumulated in the trashes, these raw materials, will be transported by the truck into a place called recycling center. In this place, there are some persons who are roled to sort these plastic bottles. The bottles which are passed the sorting process will be compressed until become the blocks. These substances, furthermore, are sent to the crusher. The crushed plastics then washed in the box which is containing the liquid. After being washed, these materials are distributed to a machine that let them to become the plastic pellets. The pellets, subsequently, are heated to make them as the raw materials. These materials, finally, are ready to be used as the main base of some products, such as clothes.

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