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The diagram below shows the cutting tools used by man 1.4 million years ago and 80000 years ago.

The diagram below shows the cutting tools used by man 1. 4 million years ago and 80000 years ago. 7Wjpn
The picture depicts cutting tools utilized by the early human and how it transformed in two separate times: 1. 4 million years ago and 80000 years ago. Overall, it can be clearly seen that cutting tools underwent significant changes over the period in terms of their form although their sizes are relatively the same. Specifically, tool B turned more sophisticated than tool A with regard to shape and sharpness. In 1. 4 million years ago, the cutting tool was a jagged piece of rock with no identifiable shape and 10 cm in length. Moreover, looking from side and back views show the stone tool was thick and had rough surface and blunt edges. 80000 years ago, this tool has a much more refinement than before. In the front and rear side, it is obvious that tool B had become bigger and resembled a tear-drop shape with a broad base and tappering toward a sharp tip, although there had been no change in the length. Additionally, its surface was more evenly and smoothly than tool A, which dated back to 1. 4 million years ago. From the side view, the prior cutting tool has evolved to become more flattened and thin, giving the tool a sharper edge on the sides as well
The picture depicts
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utilized by the early human and how it transformed in two separate times: 1. 4 million years ago and 80000 years ago.

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clearly
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that
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cutting
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tools
underwent significant
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changes
over the period in terms of their form although their sizes are
relatively
the same.
Specifically
,
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tool
B turned more sophisticated than
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tool
A with regard to shape and sharpness.

In 1. 4 million years ago, the
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cutting
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tool
was a jagged piece of rock with no identifiable shape and 10 cm in length.
Moreover
, looking from side and back views
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show
the stone
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tool
was thick and had rough surface and blunt edges.

80000 years ago, this
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tool
has a much more refinement than
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before
. In the front and rear side, it is obvious that
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tool
B had become bigger and resembled a tear-drop shape with a broad base and
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tappering
toward a sharp tip, although there had been no
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change
in the length.
Additionally
, its surface was more
evenly
and
smoothly
than
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tool
A, which dated back to 1. 4 million years ago. From the side view, the prior
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cutting
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tool
has evolved to become more flattened and thin, giving the
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tool
a sharper edge on the
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sides
as
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the cutting tools used by man 1. 4 million years ago and 80000 years ago.

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