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THE PROCESS SHOWS THE PROCESS OF CONVERTING ANIMAL HIDE INTO LEATHER GOODS

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The diagram depicts how leather goods are made up of animal skin. In general, it is evident from the picture supplied that the production of leather items from animal skin contains ten main steps, beginning with the drying of the animal skins and culminating in manufacturing final leather items At the beginning of the process, after the animal skin is dried under the sun, it is delivered to factory A by lorry. After that, the skin of the animal is washed in a mixture of soaps, and then it is soaked in lime to make clear the animal skin. Afterward, the animal’s skin is flattened and smoothed by a rolling machine Looking at the picture in more detail, before the animal skin is polished by rollers, it is soaked in a tannin vat with a mixture of water and vegetable matter. Next step, the skin is transported to factory B to produce fancy leather goods.
The diagram depicts how
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leather
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goods
are made
up of
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animal
skin.

In general
, it is evident from the picture supplied that the production of
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leather
items from
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animal
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skin
contains ten main steps, beginning with the drying of the
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animal
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skins
and culminating in manufacturing final
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leather
items

At the beginning of the process, after the
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animal
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skin
is dried
under the sun, it
is delivered
to factory A by lorry. After that, the
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skin
of the
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animal
is washed
in a mixture of soaps, and then it
is soaked
in lime to
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make
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clear
the
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animal
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skin
. Afterward, the
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animal’s
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skin
is flattened
and smoothed by a rolling machine

Looking at the picture in more detail,
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before
the
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animal
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skin
is polished
by rollers, it
is soaked
in a tannin vat with a mixture of water and vegetable matter.
Next
step, the
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skin
is transported
to factory B to produce fancy
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leather
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goods
.
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IELTS academic THE PROCESS SHOWS THE PROCESS OF CONVERTING ANIMAL HIDE INTO LEATHER GOODS

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3 paragraphs
155 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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