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Discribe the changes that took place at the Indigo Cottage

Discribe the changes that took place at the Indigo Cottage Myr19
The given diagrams shows a number of changes that took place at Indigo Cottage between and there were many changes 1990 to 2010. firstly, the major change is seen the space of the Indigo Cottage has seen a huge increase. In 1990, Indigo Cottage had only two cottages and a garden. First of all in 1991 New land Purchased and an open air swimming pool was opened in that plot form 2006 to 2007 and the open air swimming pool is found to occupy the most space. Amphitheatre wan opened between 1992 to 1994. Secondly, and again in 1993 a new land was purchased. Orchard was opened in 1995 and the opposite side of it a right triangle shaped vagetable garden was opened on the 1996 and during the same time an ellipse shaped pond was built and in 2002, trees were plantd in three different places. In total, form 1990 to 2010, 8 small and large Indigo Cottages were renovated and before that looked very large and well-developed.
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a number of
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changes
that took place at
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Indigo
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Cottage
between and there were
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many
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changes
1990 to 2010.

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firstly
, the major
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change
is
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seen
the space of the
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Indigo
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Cottage
has
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seen
a huge increase. In 1990,
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Indigo
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Cottage
had
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only
two
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cottages
and a garden.
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First of all
in 1991 New land
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Purchased
and an open air swimming pool
was opened
in that plot form 2006 to 2007 and the open air swimming pool
is found
to occupy the most space.
Possible spelling mistake. 'Amphitheatre' is British English.
Amphitheatre
wan opened
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between 1992 to 1994
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Secondly
, and again in 1993 a new land was
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purchased
. Orchard
was opened
in 1995 and the opposite side of it a right triangle shaped
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vagetable
garden
was opened
on the 1996 and during the same time an ellipse shaped pond
was built
and in 2002, trees were
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plantd
in three
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different
places.

In total, form 1990 to 2010, 8
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small
and large
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Indigo
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Cottages
were renovated
and
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before
that looked
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very
large and well-developed.
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IELTS academic Discribe the changes that took place at the Indigo Cottage

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  American English
4 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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