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The piechart below show the avaerage household expendutire in a 1950 to 2010

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The 2 pie chart illustrates the average household spending by major category in a country during the year of 1950 and 2010. overall the most people/ pending was household in 1950 and in 2010 almost pending was a food. According to the given data in 1958 a 2. 4% expand euta was a Health Care as compared to the other expendutor was the least spending household however the people most preferred exenditure in household it was A71 for CS saurav's expand euta where's the food in 1953 of the first choice more spending money was a food in 2010 in 1995 Civilization free for was a 6. 6 % and 6. 3 % in a 2000while the Healthcare ratio was a less than 3. 4 % in 1995 in 1995 Healthcare ratio was lower than other in 2010 to edition in 2010 public expenditure M higher than other area of 1995 throughout the other explain tutor was a 19 to person in 2010 while the other explain due to lower lower ratio in 1995 power the second highest proportion was a housing in 2007
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spending by major category in a country during the year of 1950 and 2010.

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in 1950 and in 2010 almost pending was
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was a Health Care as compared to the
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was the least spending
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most preferred
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it was A71 for CS
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where's the food in 1953 of the
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choice more spending money was
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in 2010 in 1995 Civilization free for was a 6. 6 % and 6. 3 % in a 2000while the Healthcare ratio was a less than 3. 4 % in 1995 in 1995 Healthcare ratio was lower than
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in 2010 to edition in 2010 public expenditure M higher than
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area of 1995 throughout the
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ratio in 1995 power the second highest proportion was a housing in 2007
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IELTS academic The piechart below show the avaerage household expendutire in a 1950 to 2010

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