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The bar chart depicts the number of units constructed in Derby and Nottingham from the year 2000 to 2009.

The bar chart depicts the number of units constructed in Derby and Nottingham from the year 2000 to 2009. qanYp

The bar chart depicts the number of units constructed in Derby and Nottingham from the year 2000 to 2009. Overall, both cities showed a steady increase throughout the years although derby maintained a steady rising trend. In contrast, Nottingham had drastic fluctuations. At the start of 2000, Nottingham had built approximately 50 houses surpassing its counterpart with a difference of about 10. Afterwards, there was a slight increase to just above 50. However, in 2002 the number of units drastically dropped to almost half the former years before picking a year later, and hitting around 75 in 2005. The amount then plummeted in 2006 and 2008 before skyrocketing to approximately 250 at the end of the period. On the other hand, the homes built in Derby town steadily rose withing the first 3 years to almost 100 but then, plateaued from 2003 to 2007. Moreover, the quantity of structures constructed experienced a dramatic jump in the final two years to nearly 350 houses in 2009.

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 2000 to 2009.

Overall
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 a steady increase throughout the years although derby maintained a steady rising trend. In contrast
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