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The process of using hydroelectric power station to produce electricity has been illustrated in the diagram.

The process of using hydroelectric power station to produce electricity has been illustrated in the diagram. paNdD
The process of using hydroelectric power station to produce electricity has been illustrated in the diagram. At first glance, depending on day and night there are total seven steps needed to generate electricity starting from reserving water at reservoir to power supply to national grid. Initially, high-level reservoir gets filled with river water which get passed through dam in day time. In the next step reserved water flow through reversible turbines which operates to generate electricity in the day and water pass down to low-level reservoir. Prior to that with the help of reversible turbines, generator of power station generates electricity and supplied to the national grid by using power lines. In the night times, the water which reserved at lower-level reservoir gets pumped through the tube using reversible turbine. Afterward, the water of lower-level reservoir pumped up to the high-level reservoir through the tube which get reserved at the high-level reservoir with the help of dam which remained close during the night.
The process of using hydroelectric
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power
station to produce
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electricity
has
been illustrated
in the diagram.

At
first
glance, depending on day and night there are total seven steps needed to generate
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electricity
starting from reserving
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water
at
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reservoir
to
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power
supply to national grid.

Initially
, high-level
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reservoir
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gets
filled with river
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water
which
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get
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passed
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through
dam in day time. In the
next
step reserved
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water
flow
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through
reversible turbines which operates to generate
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electricity
in the day and
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water
pass down to low-level
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reservoir
. Prior to that with the
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help
of reversible turbines, generator of
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power
station generates
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electricity
and supplied to the national grid by using
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power
lines. In the
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night times
, the
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water
which reserved at lower-level
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reservoir
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gets
pumped
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through
the tube using reversible turbine. Afterward, the
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water
of lower-level
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reservoir
pumped up to the high-level
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reservoir
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through
the tube which
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get
reserved at the high-level
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reservoir
with the
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help
of dam which remained close during the night.
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IELTS academic The process of using hydroelectric power station to produce electricity has been illustrated in the diagram.

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163 words
6.0
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