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The bar graph shows the proportion of internet used by people in Uk from 2005to 2006.

The bar graph shows the proportion of internet used by people in Uk from 2005to 2006. DYAek

The information related using network through the British individuals is depicted by bar graph. The data is calibrated into percentage. Overall, while the use of internet was less by the 65age groups over the period given, excessive used by the 25age people. At the first glance, it is clear, aged 25groups showed a rapid growth to 75%in 2005, whereas it decreased slightly around 70%. in next year. In the terms of 35 age groups, the number of British people used network approximately 60% and after one year it rose from 60%to 70%in 2006. With the regard of 65 age groups, they followed same pattern in both years which was accounted about 50%.

The information related using network through the British individuals is depicted
 by bar graph. The data is calibrated
 into percentage.

Overall
, while the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of internet was less by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
65age
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groups
 over the period This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
, excessive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
25age
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people
. At the first
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clear
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showed
 a rapid growth to 75%in 2005, whereas it decreased slightly
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in
next
 year.

In the terms of 35 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
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groups
, the number of British This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 network approximately 60% and after one year it rose from 60%to 70%in 2006.

With the regard of 65 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
groups
, they followed same pattern in both years which was accounted
 about 50%. 