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The changes of Grange Park made since it was frist established in 1920 and the current state of the park has been illustrated in this maps.

The changes of Grange Park made since it was frist established in 1920 and the current state of the park has been illustrated in this maps. KVEp9
The changes of Grange Park made since it was frist established in 1920 and the current state of the park has been illustrated in this maps. At first glance, it is apparent that most off the features that were in the 1920 has changed in present time except for the rose garden at the upper left corner. In 1920, there was fountain in the center of the public park. In the immideat right side of Eldon Street entrance there was a glasshouse, on the opposite site of the glasshouse there wasa rose garden and a pond for water plants. On the left side of Eldo Street entrance of the park, a rose graden between two sets of seats and there was another rose garden in the other side. Between two rose gardens in the left of Eldon Street entrance there was a stage for musician. However, in the present day, a water feature has replaced the glasshouse in the right side of the Eldon Street entrance and just outside of the water feature a new entrance for underground car park has innistalled. On the other side of water feature, rose garden and pond has been replaced by cafe and children's play area respectively. In the center of the park funtain has changed in to a square shape rose garden with seats serroundig it. In the left side of Arnold Avenue Entrance everything has removed except for the rose garden at the top left corner and a amphitheatre for concerts has stablished in the place of stage for musician.
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has replaced the glasshouse
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IELTS academic The changes of Grange Park made since it was frist established in 1920 and the current state of the park has been illustrated in this maps.

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