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The line graph shows the number of people affected with rift valley fever in three different countries in 1915.

The line graph shows the number of people affected with rift valley fever in three different countries in 1915. eE69A

In 1915, the number of people affected with rift valley fever in Japan, Mexico and Brazil are illustrated in the line graph. Overall, Brazilians diagnosed with rift valley fever rose significantly through out the given period while Mexico and Japan witnessed decrease in number. It is clearly be seen, in January 1915, only 200 Brazil citizens were identified with rift valley fever then it increased significantly to reach 1000 in May, after that remained same for a month, later showcased a sudden growth and touched almost 1500 in December; almost 8 times more that in January. As can be seen, almost 1500 Japanese people got affected with rift valley fever after-which it was reduced to half in mid May and stayed constant at the same number for two months then a rapid fall was shown in August followed by downward trend till the end to below 200. By contrast, the number of people in Mexico spotted for rift valley fever in January were just above 800; nearly half that of Japanese, then the figure went up to almost 1200 in April, later through out the given period the Mexico witnessed a drop of pandemic with fluctuation and reached just below 200 in December; the lowest statistical data among three nations.

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