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The process of recycling glass botlles into glass factory.

The process of recycling glass botlles into glass factory. 569Be
The given flow chart illustrates the process of how the bottles are recycled. Overall, what stand out from the chart is that this process is long process and involves 7 main steps. To commence with, in the first step, the glass bottles are collected from the public of three different colours green, brown and clear. In the next step, collected bottles are transported through truck for the classification process where the bottles are sorted into metal caps and plastic caps. After that, distinguished bottles are goes under processing plant in which glass is broken. After the glass is broken, it transported by car to the furnace. In furnace, broken glass is heated under 1200 degree celsius temperature in which glass and other raw materials are mixed into it. In the last step, the melted mixture are sent to the glass factory where the mixture shaped into new bottles.
The
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given
flow chart illustrates the
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process
of how the
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bottles
are recycled
.

Overall
, what stand out from the chart is that this
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process
is long
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process
and involves 7 main steps.

To commence with, in the
first
step, the
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glass
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bottles
are collected
from the public of three
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different
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colours
green, brown and
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clear
. In the
next
step, collected
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bottles
are transported
through truck for the classification
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process
where the
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bottles
are sorted
into metal caps and plastic caps. After that, distinguished
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bottles
are goes under processing plant in which
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glass
is broken
. After the
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glass
is broken
, it transported by car to the furnace. In furnace, broken
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glass
is heated
under 1200 degree
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celsius
temperature in which
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glass
and other raw materials
are mixed
into it.

In the last step, the melted mixture are
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sent
to the
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glass
factory where the mixture shaped into new
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bottles
.
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IELTS academic The process of recycling glass botlles into glass factory.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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