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Coffee buying and drinking habits in Australia

Coffee buying and drinking habits in Australia 85j6k

According to the chart, many people are tend to go to a cafe for coffee or tea. Especially, there are more than 60 percent of people who went to caffee in last four weeks in Sydney, Hobert and Melbourne. I think this is because there are a lot of cafes in these cities because more and more travelers are coming to Australia. For example, Sydney has great buildings such as Opera House. Also, Hobert, which is located on Tasmania, has magnificent nature. A lot of foreign people come to see these tourist spots. So there are many cafes for foreign tourists to use. That's why Australian are likely to go to cafe. Also, about 50 percent of people bought instant coffee in last four weeks. However, less than 40 percent ofpeople who bought fresh coffee in last four weeks in Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. This shows that Australian don't care much about however coffee's freshness is.

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