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The bar chart below provides information on the monthly visitor attendance figures across three museums in the UK between 2013-2014, while the table indicates the total number of visitors in the same period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below provides information on the monthly visitor attendance figures across three museums in the UK between 2013-2014, while the table indicates the total number of visitors in the same period. ljGLD
The bar graph shows the number of museum visitors in the UK from 2013 to 2014, while the table shows the total number of visitors in three of those museums, British Museum, National Gallery, Tate Modern. In general, we see that, British Museum shows the highest rate, having many monthly visitors for a given period. A closer look at the graph shows that the number of visitors to museums fluctuates from month to month. For example, in the beginning, British Museum had about 650, 000 visitors, but by the middle of this period it rises to 750, 000, showing the highest trend. If National Gallery had somewhere around 510, 000 visitors, exactly a year later it already has approximately 420, 000 visits. The table shows that in the British Museum, where the highest rates for visiting of the three mentioned museums show 6, 758, 935 in the fiscal year 2013-2014. Similarly, National Gallery had an average total number of visitors of 5, 903, 000, while Tate Modern had 4, 805, 768, the lowest among museums.
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The table
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IELTS academic The bar chart below provides information on the monthly visitor attendance figures across three museums in the UK between 2013-2014, while the table indicates the total number of visitors in the same period.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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