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The diagram below shows the process for making bricks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram below shows the process for making bricks. Wy1gW
The diagram illustrates the way that bricks are commonly made. Overall the process is made up of around 10 steps. In detail, the process starts when the clay is extracted from the ground by a digger. Afterwards, the clay is sieved through a metal grid, which traps the unecessary parts and drops the rest onto a roller. While on the roller, the clay is mixed with sand and water. The mixture is then shaped into the common brick shape that we all know either by a wire cutter or by a mould. Once the shape is obtained, the freshly made bricks undergo a 24 to 48 hour long process of drying, with the aid of a drying oven. After 48 hours, the bricks are now ready to be transferred into a separate oven, called kiln, which will gradually reach a temperature of 870 to 1300 degrees celsius. Once the bricks have spent enough time in the kiln, they undergo a 24 to 72 hour long cooling process, inside the cooling chamber. Now that the bricks have cooled, they are finally ready to be packaged and delivered.
The diagram illustrates the way that
bricks
are
commonly
made.
Overall
the
process
is made
up of around 10 steps.

In detail, the
process
starts
when the clay
is extracted
from the ground by a digger. Afterwards, the clay
is sieved
through a metal grid, which traps the
unecessary
parts and drops the rest onto a roller. While on the roller, the clay
is mixed
with sand and water. The mixture is then shaped into the common
brick
shape that we all know either by a wire cutter or by a
mould
. Once the shape
is obtained
, the
freshly
made
bricks
undergo a 24 to 48 hour long
process
of drying, with the aid of a drying oven. After 48 hours, the
bricks
are
now
ready to
be transferred
into a separate oven, called kiln, which will
gradually
reach a temperature of 870 to 1300 degrees
celsius
. Once the
bricks
have spent
enough
time in the kiln, they undergo a 24 to 72 hour long cooling
process
, inside the cooling chamber.
Now
that the
bricks
have cooled, they are
finally
ready to
be packaged
and delivered.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process for making bricks.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
186 words
5.5
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