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the process of recycle glass bottles.

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The given diagram illustrates different stages in the process of recycle glass bottles. Overall, there are twelve steps in the process divided into three main stages, beginning with collect used bottles and ending with provided new bottles for supermarket and customers. To begin, glass bottles are used by customers and gathered at a collection point for recycling before being delivered to cleaning plant by truck. At the second stage in the process, the bottles are cleaned up by high pressurized water and distributed base on their color green, brown or clear. After that, in a glass factory, the flasks are masticated into pieces, which was heated in furnace at high temperatures to form a liquid and the liquid is poured into a mould to form new glass bottles. In the next stage, the new glass are filled and packaged before being transported to supermarket. The process concludes with the bottles are sold for customer.
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glass
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divided into three main
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stages
, beginning with collect
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used
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bottles
and ending with provided new
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bottles
for supermarket and customers.

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glass
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bottles
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by customers and gathered at a collection point for recycling
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before
being delivered
to cleaning plant by truck. At the second
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stage
in the
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process
, the
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bottles
are cleaned
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clear
. After that, in a
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glass
factory, the flasks
are masticated
into pieces, which
was heated
in furnace at high temperatures to form a liquid and the liquid
is poured
into a
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mould
to form new
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bottles.

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, the new
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IELTS academic the process of recycle glass bottles.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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