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children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the united kingdom

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of young people in the United Kingdom from 1990 to 2001, in terms of 0 to 4, 5 to 9, 10 to 14 and 15 to 19 age groups. It is clear that the proportion of the young aged 0 to 4 hit the highest point. It is also noticeable that the data for young people 0-to-4-year-olds and 15-to-19-year-olds declined sharply, while the percentages of people 5 to 9 and 10 to 14 age groups increased suddenly. In 1990, the proportion of children from 15 to 19 years old in the United Kingdom was highest, at around 26. 1%, followed by the figures for 5 to 9, 10 to 14 and 0 to 4 age groups, at nearly 24. 7%, 23. 2% and 25. 9% respectively. Two years later, the percentage of the young aged 0 to 4 rose rapidly, reaching about 26. 5%, whilst the data for 5-to-9-year-olds saw a gradual rise, at around 25%. Meanwhile, the proportion of children between 15 and 19 years old dip abruptly to about 23. 1%, as the figure for 10-to-14-year-olds rose markedly, standing at 24. 8%. In 1995, the young 15-to-19-year-olds did not seem to change, its data being at roughly 23. 1%. In 2001, the percentages of children aged 15 to 19 and 10 to 14 rose significantly, ranging from approximately 25% to 26. 2%. At the same time, there was a dramatic decrease in the proportion of people 0-to-4-year-olds, at around 23. 8%, whereas the percentage of young people who fall into 5 to 9 age group saw a drop sharply, standing at 25. 1%.
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in the United Kingdom from 1990 to 2001, in terms of 0 to 4, 5 to 9, 10 to 14 and 15 to 19
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aged 0 to 4 hit the highest point. It is
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0-to-4-year-olds and 15-to-19-year-olds declined
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5 to 9 and 10 to 14
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increased
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In 1990, the
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in the United Kingdom was highest, at around 26. 1%, followed by the figures for 5 to 9, 10 to 14 and 0 to 4
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, at
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24. 7%, 23. 2% and 25. 9%
respectively
. Two years later, the
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aged 0 to 4 rose
rapidly
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a gradual rise, at around 25%. Meanwhile, the
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dip
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to about 23. 1%, as the figure for 10-to-14-year-olds rose
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In 1995, the
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, its data being at roughly 23. 1%. In 2001, the
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of children aged 15 to 19 and 10 to 14 rose
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, ranging from approximately 25% to 26. 2%. At the same time, there was a dramatic decrease in the
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0-to-4-year-olds, at around 23. 8%, whereas the
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who fall into 5 to 9
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IELTS academic children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the united kingdom

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