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The graph shows the amount of time from10-15 years that spend chatting on internet and playing games in UK

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Looking at the graph in more details it is clear that about less than 5% of boys spent 4 hours on chatting the internet whereas a one tenth of boys spent 4 hours on playing games. looking at the girls those who were spending 4 hours on internet recorded at 10% surprisingly all childrens shows constant figure in spending 4 hours. as coming to the 1-3 hours it is clear that two categories witness similar trend on chatting the internet which was 30% children spent 1 to 3 hours in games records at 50% it shows fluctuations in the figure of playing games by different age groupProbing further, it is noticeable that both gender exhibits similar figure in chatting on internet which was around 25% Overall it is clear that children are interested to spent 3 hours on chatting the internet

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