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The table below gives information about the statistics of sport programs are viewed in some different countries , units are measured in millions.

The table below gives information about the statistics of sport programs are viewed in some different countries, units are measured in millions. NVeLq
Overall, Tennis is the mostly watched sport among other sports However, motor racing is the least watched type of sport In Australia golf programm is watched by 7. 5 million people but less than Athletics is viewed by 3 Millon humans. The total number of sport fans are 17. 4 in Australia and in the UK which is 20. 3 but there are more people in the USA than in the UK. Athletics is a kind of sport that fewer people are interested in than tennis in Canada. Tennis is more preferable in the USA than which is in Canada. If we consider the place of in all countries, it is higher than golf. Motor racing is broadcasted less in Canada than it is in the USA. The aggregate score of the USA is more multistory than the entire result of full sport in the UK. Taking into account all the date in this table the more multistory score is in the USA.
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that fewer
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in than tennis in Canada. Tennis is more preferable in the USA than which is in Canada. If we consider the place of in all countries, it is higher than golf. Motor racing
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in the UK. Taking into account all the date in this table the more multistory score is in the USA.
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