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The process of generation of electricity

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The provided diagram in state the crucial information regarding the method of producing electric power bi water overall it is a complex process which and imposes major 5 steps, beginning with cold water and ending with generator activation at the initial stage coma cold water is stored in the tank before pump down 4. 5 km by an injection valve. Following Dev 4: 15 thermody song which is also named as ho to prepare cold water change into hot water. After that, hot water is transported to the condenser with the help of production Craft store for the more common in the condenser water bottle state change his name and password for that post steam boiler water steam changed into electricity and electricity is generated by turbine for stock at the final stage finally electric is ready for the use and passed to the towers
The provided diagram in state the crucial information regarding the method of producing electric power bi
water
overall
it is a complex process which and imposes major 5 steps, beginning with
cold
water
and ending with generator activation at the initial stage coma
cold
water
is stored
in the tank
before
pump down 4. 5 km by an injection valve. Following Dev 4: 15
thermody
song which is
also
named as ho to prepare
cold
water
change
into hot
water
. After that, hot
water
is transported
to the condenser with the
help
of production Craft store for the more common in the condenser
water
bottle state
change
his name and password for that post steam boiler
water
steam
changed
into electricity and electricity
is generated
by turbine for stock at the final stage
finally
electric is ready for the
use
and passed to the
towers
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IELTS academic The process of generation of electricity

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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