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The chartshow the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to park hotel how they rated the hotal customer service

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The pie chart illustration compare visitors in the question customer of park visitors in 2005 and 2010Overall maximum proportion of visitor5rated satisfactory in 2005 wheras in2010 rating of good was highestThe percentage of visitors rated poor in 2005 was 21 percent percent wheras decrease was 12 percent in 2010. In addition a difference of 23 was absorb the proportion of visitors rated excellent which account Ed for 5 percent in case of latter one and 28 percent in case of former one
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IELTS academic The chartshow the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to park hotel how they rated the hotal customer service

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  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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