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A Family Member You Spend Time With

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A family member I spend time with it's my father I think my father is fascinating person which I met when either. We are have a common hobbies which we can to develop with each other. For instance, we can together play chess or we can play on the PlayStation 4. Also I like observe from nature like my father. We are best friends with him. My dad is very clever and prudent person, if you will listen his speech you can grasp me, in light of the fact that my father knows everything about world which around us. In a childhood he often read a various books, and this fact didn't surprise me, therefore I always knew that he's really smart and swell person. Unfortunately, I cannot say anything about my mother because she went to the Russia with my little sister and they are living there. To be honest, I'm still missing to them but I faced the fact that they will never come back to me and my father, this is really private relationships with parents.
A family member I spend time with it's my
father
I
think
my
father
is fascinating person which I met when either. We are
have
a common
hobbies
which we can to develop with each other.
For instance
, we can together play
chess or
we can play on the PlayStation 4.
Also
I like observe from nature like my
father
. We are best friends with him.

My dad is
very
clever and prudent person, if you will listen his speech you can grasp me, in light of the fact that my
father
knows everything about world which around us.

In a childhood he
often
read a various
books
, and this fact didn't surprise me,
therefore
I always knew that he's
really
smart and swell person.

Unfortunately, I cannot say anything about my mother
because
she went to the Russia with my
little
sister and
they are living there.

To be honest, I'm
still
missing to them
but
I faced the fact that they will never
come
back to me and my
father
, this is
really
private relationships with parents.
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