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The process how produced chocolate

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The given diagram illustrates the process by which chocolate manufactured. Overall, a ten stage involved in this diagram from grain harvested and share white cacao beans to crush the grains and get liqued chocolate. This cacao is mostly grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia. Imitally, the harvested grain and share with cacao beans. In the third stage the beans are fermented that is sorted. They are left on the ground in order to dry. Next they put in large sacks. The sacks transported by train or lerry, are put on the train or lerry, which take the cargo to the factory. Next section is the acceptance of the good by the factory. The eighth stage is fry beans in 350 degrees. After which the beans was crushed and outer shell was removed. Finally the beans was pressed by machine and get liquid chocolate. It is a great process.
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diagram illustrates the process by which chocolate manufactured.
Overall
, a ten stage involved in this diagram from grain harvested and share white cacao
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beans
to crush the grains and
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get
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liqued
chocolate. This cacao is
mostly
grown in South America, Africa and Indonesia.
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Imitally
, the harvested grain and share with cacao
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beans
. In the third stage the
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beans
are fermented
that
is sorted
. They are
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left
on the ground in order to dry.
Next
they put in large sacks. The sacks transported by train or
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lerry
,
are put
on the train or
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lerry
, which take the cargo to the factory.
Next
section is the acceptance of the
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good
by the factory. The eighth stage is fry
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beans
in 350 degrees. After which the
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beans
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was
crushed and outer shell
was removed
.
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Finally
the
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beans
was pressed
by machine and
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get
liquid chocolate. It is a great process.
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IELTS academic The process how produced chocolate

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