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The graph illustrates the proportion of the house technology access trends in the UK between 1994 and 2008.

The graph illustrates the proportion of the house technology access trends in the UK between 1994 and 2008. JwMxk
The graph illustrates the proportion of the house technology access trends in the UK between 1994 and 2008. The General overview is that, the access patterns of CD player, DVD player Mobile phone and Internet connection rose gradually during the period. However, the trend of CD player was downward by 2008. The percentage of CD player access increased steadily from nearly 50% in 1994 to 90% by 2004, then dropped slowly by 2008. There was a gradual rise of the internet connection from 10% in 1998 to 65% by 2008. In addition, the DVD player access climbed dramatically from 30% in 2002 to 80% by 2005 then grew gradually. Furthermore, the trend of mobile phone access rose rapidly then leveled off and dropped slightly. It is apparent that, the trend of DVD player access rocketed significantly during first 3 years then trend was upward and reached the highest percentage by 2008.
The graph illustrates the proportion of the
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in the UK between 1994 and 2008.

The General overview is that, the
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patterns of CD
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player
, DVD
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player
Mobile phone and Internet connection rose
gradually
during the period.
However
, the
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of CD
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was downward by 2008.

The percentage of CD
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access
increased
steadily
from
nearly
50% in 1994 to 90% by 2004, then dropped
slowly
by 2008. There was a gradual rise of the internet connection from 10% in 1998 to 65% by 2008.
In addition
, the DVD
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player
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access
climbed
dramatically
from 30% in 2002 to 80% by 2005 then grew
gradually
.
Furthermore
, the
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trend
of mobile phone
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access
rose
rapidly
then leveled off and dropped
slightly
.

It is apparent that, the
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of DVD
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player
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access
rocketed
significantly
during
first
3 years then
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trend
was upward and reached the highest percentage by 2008.
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