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Provided is the map giving information about the changes that took place in the layout of a library over the 26-year period from 1995. Overall, it is apparent that the arrangement of the library has experienced profound modifications.

Provided is the map giving information about the changes that took place in the layout of a library over the 26-year period from 1995. Overall, it is apparent that the arrangement of the library has experienced profound modifications. 2RYew
Provided is the map giving information about the changes that took place in the layout of a library over the 26-year period from 1995. Overall, it is apparent that the arrangement of the library has experienced profound modifications. As can be seen, the place where reference books and maps were located, which is in the top left corner, was converted into that for computers with Internet access. Additionally, the computers without internet access storage in front of it were demolished and a row of chairs was put up instead. In the meantime, the location of the self-service desk, as well as new books in turn, have taken the areas which were used as the librarian’s desk and local reference books storage. In terms of changes in area, it is noticeable that in the middle of the library where the newspapers storage, a study table, a group of chairs and a book display were located was renovated. To be specific, the book display has been upgraded and taken the place of other utilities. Furthermore, the location of both the entrance and photocopiers stayed where they were
Provided is the map giving information about the
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changes
that took place in the layout of a library over the 26-year period from 1995.
Overall
, it is apparent that the arrangement of the library has experienced profound modifications.

As can be
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seen
, the place where reference
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books
and maps
were located
, which is in the top
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left
corner,
was converted
into that for computers with Internet access.
Additionally
, the computers without internet access storage in front of it
were demolished
and a row of chairs
was put
up
instead
. In the meantime, the location of the self-service desk,
as well
as new
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books
in turn, have taken the areas which were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
as the librarian’s desk and local reference
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books
storage.

In terms of
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changes
in area, it is noticeable that in the middle of the library where the
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newspapers
storage, a study table, a group of chairs and a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
display
were located
was renovated
. To be specific, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
display has
been upgraded
and taken the place of other utilities.
Furthermore
, the location of both the entrance and photocopiers stayed where they were
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IELTS academic Provided is the map giving information about the changes that took place in the layout of a library over the 26-year period from 1995. Overall, it is apparent that the arrangement of the library has experienced profound modifications.

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184 words
6.5
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