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The given maps indicate how the art gallery in Australia was transformed between 1950 and present. Overall, it is clear that the art gallery had been greatly developed with the conversion of cafe into children artschool and toilet. Another notable feature is appearance of the brand-new Australian Aboriginal Art which is expanded in the North of the area. In 1950, the North of the art gallery was covered by the courtyard which was demolished to extend the Children art school in the left-hand side and the Austrlia Art in the right-hand side. In the West, there was a rennovation of a toilet and cafe, while the temporary exihibition and bookshop witnessed no changed. With regard to access, in the top of area, the Australian Aboriginal Art was constructed. There was also construction of the Australian Art which was replaced by the Asia Art in the East of the art gallery. Meanwhile, the early European Art and Middle European Art experienced no flattened.
The
given
maps indicate how the
art
gallery
in Australia
was transformed
between 1950 and present.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the
art
gallery
had been
greatly
developed with the conversion of
cafe
into children
artschool
and toilet. Another notable feature is appearance of the brand-new Australian Aboriginal
Art
which
is expanded
in the North of the area.

In 1950, the North of the
art
gallery
was covered
by the courtyard which
was demolished
to extend the Children
art
school in the
left
-hand side and the
Austrlia
Art
in the right-hand side. In the West, there was a
rennovation
of a toilet and
cafe
, while the temporary
exihibition
and bookshop witnessed no
changed
.

With regard to access, in the top of area, the Australian Aboriginal
Art
was constructed
. There was
also
construction of the Australian
Art
which
was replaced
by the Asia
Art
in the East of the
art
gallery
. Meanwhile, the early European
Art
and Middle European
Art
experienced no flattened.
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