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The process graph shows the stages of growing and making the tea.

The process graph shows the stages of growing and making the tea. 8aR1V
The diagram illustrates the process for the making of tea. There are several stages in the process, beginning with identifying the growth location of the tea plants and culminating in consuming the product. To begin, the tea is sown and grown in India and China. It is sown by farmers in a big field, and then the sun shines and the seeds are grown into large plants. At this point, the tea leaves are picked and put under the sun to dry, the dried tea leaves are then packed into boxes and loaded onto lorries to deliver to supermarkets. After which the tea is bought and taken home by consumers. The next stage is making the tea at home. The water is put to boil. Once the water is boiled, the water is then poured into tea. After being left for two minutes, milk and sugar are added to the tea. Subsequently, the ready tea is then drunk and enjoyed by people.
The diagram illustrates the process for the making of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tea
. There are several stages in the process, beginning with identifying the growth location of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tea
plants and culminating in consuming the product. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tea
is sown
and grown in India and China. It
is sown
by farmers in a
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big
field, and then the sun shines and the seeds
are grown
into large plants. At this point, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
are picked
and put under the sun to dry, the dried
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
are then packed into boxes and loaded onto lorries to deliver to supermarkets. After which the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tea
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
and taken home by consumers. The
next
stage is making the
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tea
at home. The water
is put
to boil. Once the water
is boiled
, the water is then poured into
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tea
. After being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
for two minutes, milk and sugar are
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added
to the
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tea
.
Subsequently
, the ready
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tea
is then drunk and enjoyed by
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people
.
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162 words
6.0
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