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The table and bar chart presents information about how journey times in a city centre changed when the transportation network was improved and the costs of using different forms of transport in the city. Overall, the average journey time was shorter once the transport network was improved, except car. Trams had the most effective improvement in time duration. It fell by 6 minutes to 16 minutes. Similarly to the tram, the bus has become faster than before, though it still takes 23 minutes. Both before and after the network improvements, taxi still the quickest mode of transportation in the city although became slower by decreasing 3 minutes. Meanwhile, the bar graph shows that taxi was the most expensive mode of transportation, costing approximately 1. 80. In contrast, the tram and bus were less expensive. They only took 0. 40 and 0. 20. To sum up, after the refinement of transport network tram saw the most significant improvement in time of journey and while the taxi was the fastest transport, public transport still more suitable for the transportation in the city.
The table and bar chart presents information about how journey
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in a city
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changed
when the
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transportation
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network
was
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improved
and the costs of using
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different
forms of
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transport
in the city.

Overall
, the average journey
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time
was shorter once the
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transport
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network
was
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improved
, except car. Trams had the most effective improvement in
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time
duration. It fell by 6 minutes to 16 minutes.
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to the tram, the bus has become faster than
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, though it
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takes 23 minutes. Both
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before
and after the
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network
improvements, taxi
still
the quickest mode of
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transportation
in the city although became slower by decreasing 3 minutes.

Meanwhile, the bar graph
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shows
that taxi was the most expensive mode of
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transportation
, costing approximately 1. 80.
In contrast
, the tram and bus were less expensive. They
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only
took 0. 40 and 0. 20.

To sum up, after the refinement of
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transport
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network
tram
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saw
the most significant improvement in
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time
of journey and while the taxi was the fastest
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transport
, public
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still
more suitable for the
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transportation
in the city.
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